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Opposite's Attract? by StormyBlizzard-24 Opposite's Attract? by StormyBlizzard-24
:iconranranruuplz: :)So I wanted to try out a monochrome-ish art style. An example is like this! Yeah, I know... >.<
But I like the way it came out! :3 I'm so happy about that!
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Anyway, about the picture. I've always seen fan arts where Sasuke is always the one wearing the fancy clothes and Naruto regular clothing. So... I tried to switch it up a bit!! ^^ (In all honesty I tried to make their clothes fashionable ... Epic fail, I know! >.<) But yeah... And as a way to not put Sasuke too down in clothing, I made his style a little it more punk-ish :3! Yay! 'Cause like come on ! He has that rock style just waiting to be released. And oh yeah, as for the colors... I tried to make specific stuff stand out.. like Naruto's hair and eyes :D

Hope You like! And tell me whether or not you like this non colour-ish style! :)
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So this is supposed to be a monochrome-ish style piece. Let's keep that in mind throughout this critique.

As for the incorporation of this style into this piece, I think that the emphasized color points were just all over the place. Like there was too much emphasis on too many things. When I clicked on this, I didn't realize that it was supposed to be monochrome. If I did this, then I would have incorporated less shading in the colored parts and keep it more of one shade. Maybe like both Naruto's and Sasuke's hair. That'd be yellow and navy(or darker) blue. And the little heart in the middle. Can't forget that, since it's vital to the interpretation of the piece.

As for the clothing, I believe that you got it pretty good. Sasuke's pants look odd with the shading of the chain there, but otherwise, it's pretty good! I kinda see where you're coming from for the clothing choices, but I think that you could've added a bit more volume to the sweater/scarf around Sasuke's neck. Those things usually aren't made up of thin material, so they'd stick out. I liked Naruto's necklace since it was detailed a bit, but not too much. It really fit in with his clothing.

The shading kinda took away from the cohesiveness of this because Naruto's clothing isn't fully shaded black, while Sasuke's clothes are completely shaded the color that they are. The shading on Sasuke's face is a bit off too. In my opinion, there shouldn't be such a big area of his face that is shaded because then Naruto's face should be shaded in a similar was also. The areas that are slightly darker are showing where the light source of your piece is coming from and there isn't much cohesiveness in it. I think that you could take this into account another time.

The anatomical feature of this piece. Overall, there're fine, but there are a few errors. The first one is that Naruto's mouth seems a bit off-center. It is also too low on his face. Second, Sasuke's hand is off. Is it a fist or something else? Third, Sasuke's clavicle(collarbone) is a bit off. He's facing forward, so it should be in around the same area as Naruto's clavicles are.

Overall, I think that it was a pretty decent effort into trying out a this new style! I hope that I wasn't too harsh, thanks for letting me critique your art!
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YaoiTotoro Sep 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This looks good enough to be a cover for comic! ... yeah making one? XD
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:iconstormyblizzard-24:
StormyBlizzard-24 Sep 16, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
xD Ha ha... now that I look at it, I don't like how it came out.  But no, I'm  not ^^
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Narusakubaby Jun 29, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
SasuNaru :p
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:iconstormyblizzard-24:
StormyBlizzard-24 Jun 29, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
:heart: ^^ :D
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:iconnarakukaku:
kyaa!! esta genial!! lo amo!! Dattebayo~!
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:iconstormyblizzard-24:
StormyBlizzard-24 Jun 25, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Gracias~~! :D :3
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:iconhanonymousxo:
I love this! Great piece :D
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:iconstormyblizzard-24:
StormyBlizzard-24 Jun 25, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Za Neh~~~ thank you! :3 :iconpervynarutoplz:
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thedidichan Jun 24, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
cute!
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:iconstormyblizzard-24:
StormyBlizzard-24 Jun 25, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Thank You! :D
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